EXPERIENCE COMES WITH TIME
Experience means making something more than once, when an action is repeated over a period of time you may notice that you get better and faster than before.
To get experience is necessary dedication, for example when I started to learn how to play drums I had to practice one or two hours at day. I use to do it often and after a month I could play almost every exercise on drums.
We have to spend a lot of time in order to learn because our brain analyzes and remembers information needed to perform activities like like when we play a sport or drive a car when we started talking a language or playing a sport. To learn to swim I followed these steps, first I learned how to float then how to breathe underwater and eventually I learned the technique so it took many months for this.
Finally, I noticed that experience are reached after many tries. Each attempt worth it doesn't matter if sometimes you fail, is necessary to improve yourself, in every activity you want because as the saying goes, "Nothing ventured,nothing gained"
Hello!
ReplyDeleteI think you skipped the thesis statement. In your first paragraph you could add a sencence like 'For getting experience, you need dedication, discipline, and perseverance'. And, with this, your supporting paragraphs would fit pretty well.
Cheers,
Luis